Post by Leroy on Apr 1, 2010 3:47:47 GMT -5
Sorry, but I am going to have to say Not Accepted. There are several reasons why.
First of all, each character should have its own account. This one is easy to fix. Just create a new account then copy and paste what you have written (with the necessary modifications) into a new reply below this post.
The second problem is also easy to fix. I like what you have in your biography, but the Profile Template states that the character biography needs two be at least two paragraphs long. Usually I'm not too uptight about a rule bend like that, but I figured I would mention it anyway as long as I was at it.
The third problem has to do with morphing. You have Kita using the morphing ability before she joins up with SPECTER. The animorphs don't receive the morphing ability until after they are recruited (there are a few possible exceptions, but there is no reason given for why Kita would be one of the exceptions).
The fourth and last problem has to do with the animals Kita has supposedly acquired. Since she shouldn't have the morphing ability yet, then obviously she shouldn't have so many morphs. But even so, it still would have been way too many to start off with. We used to have limits on acquiring morphs to keep something like this from happening, but now people are expected to create self-imposed limits. You may disagree, but I find that half the fun is getting through situations with the morphs you already have, or else finding a way to acquire the morphs you really need. Starting off having a bunch of morphs that 'cover all grounds' seems kind of like playing with cheat codes enabled.
Plus there was no mention for how she would have gotten a hand on all those different animals (because the first rule of morphing is that you can't acquire what you can't touch).
Anyway, if you make the necessary adjustments, me or one of the mods will be happy to look over it again.
First of all, each character should have its own account. This one is easy to fix. Just create a new account then copy and paste what you have written (with the necessary modifications) into a new reply below this post.
The second problem is also easy to fix. I like what you have in your biography, but the Profile Template states that the character biography needs two be at least two paragraphs long. Usually I'm not too uptight about a rule bend like that, but I figured I would mention it anyway as long as I was at it.
The third problem has to do with morphing. You have Kita using the morphing ability before she joins up with SPECTER. The animorphs don't receive the morphing ability until after they are recruited (there are a few possible exceptions, but there is no reason given for why Kita would be one of the exceptions).
The fourth and last problem has to do with the animals Kita has supposedly acquired. Since she shouldn't have the morphing ability yet, then obviously she shouldn't have so many morphs. But even so, it still would have been way too many to start off with. We used to have limits on acquiring morphs to keep something like this from happening, but now people are expected to create self-imposed limits. You may disagree, but I find that half the fun is getting through situations with the morphs you already have, or else finding a way to acquire the morphs you really need. Starting off having a bunch of morphs that 'cover all grounds' seems kind of like playing with cheat codes enabled.
Plus there was no mention for how she would have gotten a hand on all those different animals (because the first rule of morphing is that you can't acquire what you can't touch).Anyway, if you make the necessary adjustments, me or one of the mods will be happy to look over it again.
